Our First Kiss I.P.

By threeleafshamrock

Sun, 29 May 2011

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12 comments

Our first kiss -
longed for, with trepidation.
Eyes locking briefly,
like the headlights
of oncoming vehicles.
Navigating the darkness,
on a collision course,
driven by lover's dreams.

The impact -
softly crushing;
delightfully devastating
preemptive fears.
Trembling,
beautifully lost
in the ecstatic realization
of a destination reached;
a journey begun!

Comments

Nice one!

Permalink Submitted by seashore on Sun, 2011-05-29 08:30

Nice one!

This made me ponder and try

Permalink Submitted by Highhat on Sun, 2011-05-29 08:39

This made me ponder and try to remember. Thank you for this lovely poem and sharing your experience. ;)Pia

Hi threeleafshamrock, Wow!

Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on Sun, 2011-05-29 11:55

Hi threeleafshamrock, Wow! sounds wonderful, this IP has really got your imagination going. Jenny.

Thanks Seashore...and yes it

Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on Sun, 2011-05-29 12:01

Thanks Seashore...and yes it was hehe Chris ;)

Thanks Pia, thankfully (or

Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on Sun, 2011-05-29 12:03

Thanks Pia, thankfully (or woefully), it has been repeated on many occasions and never lost its charm :) Chris ;)

Thanks Jenny, my imagination

Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on Sun, 2011-05-29 12:04

Thanks Jenny, my imagination is always going; not always in the right direction hahaha Chris ;)

new threeleafshamrock Hi!

Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on Sun, 2011-05-29 13:10

new threeleafshamrock Hi! enjoyed this charm poem. Let your imagination go, good for an (IP) and 1st one. julie xx

yes that awkward moment when

Permalink Submitted by maisie on Sun, 2011-05-29 14:09

yes that awkward moment when you know your nose is too big, and will you end up with a bash of teeth, lol. Not to mention the fact that specs get tangled... i remember it well...........! good poem

maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!

Thanks for the kind comments

Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on Sun, 2011-05-29 22:20

Thanks for the kind comments Julie Chris ;)

Thanks Maisie, I remember it

Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on Sun, 2011-05-29 22:21

Thanks Maisie, I remember it well lol Chris ;)

Well expressed. I like the

Permalink Submitted by well-wisher on Mon, 2011-05-30 00:03

Well expressed. I like the driving analogy, the driving rhythm and the striking imagery which you use. Especially: "Eyes locking briefly, like the headlights of oncoming vehicles. Navigating the darkness, on a collision course, driven by lover's dreams."

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn

Thanks Well Wisher and

Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on Wed, 2011-07-20 11:03

Thanks Well Wisher and Nathan, appreciate you both taking the time to read... Chris ;)

Our First Kiss I.P.

By threeleafshamrock

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Nice one!

This made me ponder and try

Hi threeleafshamrock, Wow!

Thanks Seashore...and yes it

Thanks Pia, thankfully (or

Thanks Jenny, my imagination

new threeleafshamrock Hi!

yes that awkward moment when

Thanks for the kind comments

Thanks Maisie, I remember it

Well expressed. I like the

Thanks Well Wisher and

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