Seasoned Promises
By threeleafshamrock
Tue, 30 Mar 2010
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Stumbling heavy lidded t'ward a papier-mache morn;
spring, unsprung and bleached to shades of grey.
The dogs approach the threshold, as if a precipice;
they share my reticence to meet the day.
Nature has no nature for the seasoned promises
that it kept faith with once, when I was young.
Now I doubt the rectitude of memories, long past,
when morning chorus' remain unsung.
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Very atmospheric this, Chris
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Very atmospheric this, Chris and I can only hope that spring, springs soon for you...and all of us, come to that.
Love this line, and can just see the expression on those dogs' faces:-
"The dogs approach the threshold, as if a precipice;.."
Nice one;-
Tina XXX
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I agree with Tina - so
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
I agree with Tina - so atmospheric! You're so brilliant with rhythm, Chris - this one just flows so well, a very big well done ;)
Magic xxx
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This reads so beautifully,
This reads so beautifully, the words are wonderfully crafted. I have a lab too, do they all pull those faces? :~}
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