a hell of a ride

By tibi popovici

Tue, 24 Mar 2015
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easy girl, easy girl... nina stop it! were her words after jumping from horse back, furious. It's the second time you do that, she said. I will never get out for a ride with you! Dea was blue on her face, with trembling hands, she get inside and lay down on bed, leaving the door opened. The mare looked at her sadly, but what she can do now. Was such a great wheather, sunny, everything green and for the second time out, after a long winter. Was not her fault! But why a human female can't understand that?

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Submitted by Bee on

Seeing through the eyes of an animal. Sad we don't always understand. If you read through again, you will spot some extra words where you probably changed things then forgot to take out the old. Liked this little clip.

Bee

Submitted by tibi popovici on

Such a nice description, Bee. Thank you very much!

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

I was thrown the first time I ever got on a horse.  I think the stable-girl gave me the wrong horse for a laugh, but it certainly wasn't funny.  Some months later, I tried again at a different stables, and got thrown again.  Needless to say, I gave riding up as a bad job, then.  Very much enjoyed this tibi, as with all your work.  LIke a breath of fresh air, as they saysmiley

Tina

 

Submitted by tibi popovici on

Interesting experience, Tina! I remember something similar, perhaps that was the reason I was writtin this short tale smiley Thanks for reading! Your work is great as well wink Keep going!