LUST

By TJW

Wed, 17 Jan 2024
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6 comments
 

Bright darkness

smooth and some

what

surreal and deserty and

calm with a metallic me

lo

dy

because war is metal and

hard and smooth and 

quick and

draaaaaawn

ouuuut 

with every move  that is 

a FLASH or 

a BANG or

a SCREAM or

a hot light into a 

light darkness and

suddenly blindness deaf

ness

SMACK

BANG

forever

never

PAINLESS in the head

Better off dead

....smells like ....metal

metallic...high copper

BLOOD

my mind is

MUD

DLED

sorry...shhhh

hush

hush

meant to be subtle

so 

subtly this ends

....

where is the memory

that is a friend....

?

?

?

shoot between heart beats

breathe after not breathing

.....

this is life

?

I'm leaving

Say a whisp

of a

per

and the dead remain dead

and the death dealers

remain unsure

so yeah

killed by the killers

medicated by fillers

that rock the head

better to be

un

dead

?

 

 

Certificate 18
Non-fiction

Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

We need soldiers. But it must be very hard to be one, or to have been one. While we live we may be able to support. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by TJW on

You're a sweetheart 

 

Submitted by marandina on

Keep on writing this stuff, TJ. From the heart. I hope you heal in time.

 

Submitted by TJW on

The world needs more men like you.

 

Submitted by Tom Brown on

Unreal incredibly descriptive, very convincing you must have experience yourself. I've never been in a war just stumbling out of state hospital last time, the student was so kind she tried to clean me up, "you look like you were in a war zone".

Cheers! Tom

 

Submitted by TJW on

That's funny, appreciate it