The ringer
By valiswaverider
Fri, 01 Jul 2011
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Am I brave and clear minded?
Or punch-drunk and flat footed
Crawling on the canvas
Senses shaken
Jaw numbed, nose thick with blood, cannot breath
Two opponents
Out of focus
Slip bob and weave
Anything to survive
Hit and hold make him suffer
Pulled apart, still in the fight
But feeling mauled
Ding–ding
End of the round
Feel spent
The ceiling spins
Gripping the ring apron
Outside the ropes
What waits?
This guys a ringer
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The change of viewpointa
The change of viewpointa makes me feel punch drunk!
Although when considered at the end, the poem as a whole works very well and I enjoyed it.
Thanks!
maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!
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