MUTATIONS (Montevideo, April 20th, 2011)

By verozone
Tue, 26 Apr 2011
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MUTATIONS (Montevideo, April 20th, 2011)
So I will alter you
beyond recognition
and make you red
and blue
until no one can tell
how silly of me
it was to be hooked
by your infant mind
your primate lust
what only I see:
the beauty
of what you could be
if you learn
to give
So I will alter you
beyond mugshots
police lineups
memories
until no one
can have a clue
but I still know
that it is you
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real performance piece!
real performance piece! Reads aloud very well.
might be improved if you used punctuation, so that others know where you want it to break...or not.
enjoyed it hugely.
maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!
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I actually think it's fine
I actually think it's fine without the punctuation. It adds to the pace. I agree that it reads aloud very well.
Rob
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