10 Christmas Penguins

new Well-wisher This is a great children's poem. Loved it. Made me laugh cheered me up out on a cold night,'Singing for pleasure' with our great,conductor Simon Gray all in a choir,December 16th two performances Hove Town Hall,The Martlets Spectacular Christmas show. like stanza 6 6 tiny penguins wrapping up presents to give. One wrapped himself by mistake and then there were five Ah! how did you know I was wearing my nylon fur Penguin coat to-night,once covered in blood then, from an incident fall,but washed out thanks goodness me. I have a poem called "P-P-P Pick Up A Penguin" on here,the Editor t.Cook truly helped me with,got a cherry for it,wow! I said at the time,the Cherry! should be for our Editor t.Cook (Tony) help in it. Hope you get one to thrilled,poem came from row of Penguins on the coat,powder blue,bottom half like white snow flakes,surrounded with black beak penguins on.Have some coats,but love and laugh,and admire say love the penguin coat. I once made a Penguin and a baby,nylon fur,stuff it,toy I was pleased. Keep warm,temperature is dropping. Your poem is so clever,way have written it,all numbers and images,like 'The Twelfth Day Of Christmas'song. julie x

new well-wisher Thanks lovely comment,so did I especially for church! Then feel dull then. The coat was present to the daughter,not keen on,fell in love wit,.when she brought it over,from her friend,whoops! all okay luckily friend didn't mind,our daughter young always wore blacks browns,fashion so bright now. Think may cheer! one up. Cheap sparkle things,rings clothes,nail varnish,remarks they like,so wear most of times,so lifts me up.but truly it's the person that counts inside it. I was never flamboyant,can sometimes in poem. Surprise myself. £3 ring remark like in shops now. Like like bit what I have. Well I'm getting on cheers me up. Some colours are healing too. Or rooms. The TV programme,mentioned Penguins can talk to each other,good programme. Interesting poor things in Antarctic South Polar regions cold,weather climate so changing. Sitting with their flippers flapping. You are very good writer,looked up flamboyant,says shine and glow like a flame,so you must be. julie

new well-wisher Thanks lovely comment,so did I especially for church! Then feel dull then. The coat was present to the daughter,not keen on,fell in love wit,.when she brought it over,from her friend,whoops! all okay luckily friend didn't mind,our daughter young always wore blacks browns,fashion so bright now. Think may cheer! one up. Cheap sparkle things,rings clothes,nail varnish,remarks they like,so wear most of times,so lifts me up.but truly it's the person that counts inside it. I was never flamboyant,can sometimes in poem. Surprise myself. £3 ring remark like in shops now. Like like bit what I have. Well I'm getting on cheers me up. Some colours are healing too. Or rooms. The TV programme,mentioned Penguins can talk to each other,good programme. Interesting poor things in Antarctic South Polar regions cold,weather climate so changing. Sitting with their flippers flapping. You are very good writer,looked up flamboyant,says shine and glow like a flame,so you must be. julie

that was really cute....sucked in by the title and was not disappointed :) - alvin

You've been nailing it with a few beauties recently. This one is great. A good concept. Thumbs up.