February Snowflakes

By well-wisher

Sat, 23 Feb 2013
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4 comments
 

Snowflakes

tip-toe,

lightly,

on the air

like white fairies

dancing everywhere;

land

like kisses

on my nose

and hair

then,

like magic,

they all

disappear.

Certificate U
Poem
Children's Poems
Nature

Comments

Submitted by coolibah on
This would make an even nicer monometric sonnet... very honestly.

Submitted by well-wisher on
Thank you, coolibah. It was written down very hurriedly, inspired by the snow that fell earlier today but I could restructure it. Glad you liked it.

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn

Submitted by coolibah on
Absolutely, and pretty please. Children (and big ones like me) would love this even more as little (iambic)song (sonnet) Just remember, it's kosher to have four syllables in the last line of MMS's rather than just the implied two.

Submitted by Bee on
Really nice. A pretty picture. Bee
Bee