It's easy to love
By willowtree
Thu, 27 Mar 2008
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"There is no such thing as paranoia
it's only as bad as you feel it is
I hate to have told you so..."
D-A-D
Mercy greediness
on your knees for
LOVE
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Thought this was going to be
Thought this was going to be a rambling journal entry. But it's a damned good poem. I like the line about paranoia, if you feel it it must be there, even if it isn't. I'd like there to have been more of this, unless of course it's one of those structured poems that only has so many lines and a load of rules, in which case it's probably a damned site cleverer than I'd thought because it's hard to make your thoughts go in certain places. Anyway if it is freeform I think extanding it would give the reader a better idea of where you are with it.
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