Girl With No Friends

By Yazmin

Wed, 01 Oct 2008
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Girl. Full stop. Five feet tall. Sitting on a concrete wall.
Who is she? What's her name? Why's she angry? Who's to blame?
They say her life is full of lies.
How d'you know?
Its in her eyes.
Girl. Full stop. Five feet tall. She's not sitting on the wall.
She had no life
She followed no trends.
But all she wanted was some friends.

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Submitted by luigi_pagano on
Nice, compact, poem which says a lot in few lines. One small criticism: rather than 'whose to blame?' I believe it should be 'who's to blame?'

 

Submitted by Amanda-Moo on
This is very powerful... it reminds me a lot of real life. How something very sad could have been avoided if someone just got some attention. I'm very glad I found this poem. Good job. Amanda.

Amanda.

Submitted by Yazmin on
Thank you all very much, Im glad you liked it :)

Yaz