The Land Called Love
By Yazmin
Fri, 20 Mar 2009
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You've entered a land called Love
Here in your room I see
Special Changes;
Dark pools of Blusher
Spears of blood Red and Pink,
Behind sweet smelling Demons
Luring weak Angels.
Sharp blades snag your skin
As hells rods make all things straight
But do not make haste
With the first Beauty you see.
Because you will alwyas rank under
Cars, Football,TV "The Lads"
And a Pint.
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Like the last 5 lines
Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Like the last 5 lines especially; says a lot. Keep it up.
Chris XX
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