Conditions That Please or Displease Flowers
By Yutka
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In the heart of a clean room, where sunlight spills,
A window frames the world, a clear portal to dreams,
Here, flowers blossom, nurtured by tender hands,
The poet, lost in hobbies, ink-stained fingers,
crafting verses like petals, soft and delicate,
poems mingle with the scent of fresh blooms,
A carefree friend arrives, laughter echoing,
Sharing secrets from books on flower care,
Each page a promise, each line a dance of colour.
But outside, a tumult of conditions unfolds,
Dogs clash, their growls a discordant symphony,
A fight in front of the window, a raucous display,
Guests come and go, like passing clouds,
Their chatter disrupting the silence of the blooms,
False expressions of love, like shadows in the sun,
Poems penned to appease, to fill the empty spaces,
Yet the heart knows the weight of insincerity,
Family inquiries, a constant ledger of accounts,
While the beauty of flowers craves the soft touch of truth.
Books, neglected, lie in disarray,
Their spines cracked, stories waiting to be told,
A rhyming dictionary clutched in desperate hands,
Each word a struggle, a battle for perfection,
In the hush that follows turmoil, there is no peace,
that is the elusive moment when blooms have enough,
close up, and flowers wilt utterly humiliated…
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what an interesting
what an interesting perspective to choose - thank you Yutka, a beautifully illustrated word picture
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Vivid painting in words how
Vivid painting in words how the harshness of reality can impact not only flowers but also our inner world.
Jenny.
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"..While the beauty of
"..While the beauty of flowers craves the soft touch of truth..."
The poem reads like a metaphor - a world full of anguish juxtaposed against a lament for the neglected beauty of nature. I read it a few times. I really like the layers and inner meaning.
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This is beautiful writing,
This is beautiful writing, Yutka. The contrasts, and indeed the writing process itself, are wonderfully drawn. Thank you for this.
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This beautiful piece is our Friday Pick of the Day! Please do share if you enjoy it too.
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Poem of the Week
This is also our Poem of the Week - congratulations!
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the battle for perfection is
the battle for perfection is never won, but the wow is here with your poetic pictures of flowers and friends.
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