Retrace me
By Yutka
Sun, 22 Mar 2009
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No need for lock and key
where I go shadow-less.
Torn into blue my shade,
mangled and frayed,
away from do and don’t
I disobeyed.
No trace of the old house,
the winding road, the gate.
I left the world you know,
behind, below;
am now pure energy
in ebb and flow.
I talk to you, my voice
is close to sky and stars,
the wind, the breathing sea.
When you unlock the past,
the scent of memory
will be the key.
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Oh, this is so beautiful,
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Oh, this is so beautiful, Yutka, it really did send a shiver down my spine and made the hairs on the back of my neck really stand on end.
I cannot pick a favourite stanza, they are all excellent, but I think this one just wins by a whisker.
"Torn into blue my shade,
mangled and frayed,
away from do and don’t
I disobeyed."
Nice to see you posting again:-)
Tina
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