Gone the rag sound of a bird alone dropped on naked silence between dumpsters' grinding regurgitations from horizon's bridge and fuzzy pulse of cars...
i used to cross slow growing moss swells by tree masts, tossing, lichen rigged, see in the distance dragon wings, folded into hills. But now, words'...
W hen she woke up, Mary did not feel tired anymore. Ever since she had had to stay at Jake’s house, it had taken ages to go to sleep. Night time was...
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Just so long as it's not
Posted on Tue, 08 Oct 2024
Just so long as it's not direct debit, as then they can put it up without telling. And she might find it really hard to unsubscribe. (Or, maybe she could ask for Spencer to get really brainy as an update and he could unsubscribe for her? Would he...
Hi Jenny, thankyou for this lovely poem, I can imagine you very clearly, looking up at the gulls :0) I love watching them too, sure they are enjoying flying, riding the wind :0) I have been thinking often about you as the days get closer to 11th...
I liked this very much, feel cruel when lifting something in the garden, turn the woodlice world upside down, had never thought of it being like being forced to confront the endless sky. How lies can be more understandable, more comforting than...
I loved your description of being a tom-boy and play-fighting :0) You have brought happy family life and care and love into your poem about toys. Cross-eyed Bear made me smile, too. I guess not wanting the train set but being interested in your...
I hope Archibald didn't carry the tea trolley back, then put the wheel on when he got there, sort of thing he might do :0) you have put the cliffhanger in the middle for a change. I am trying to think Who is it the detectives are going to find...
My son is often asking where I would most like to go, and I say a Greek island, because of Gerald Durrel. Now because of you, too. Very glad your beautiful poem got Pick of the Week. I am so very sorry Crado has not come back yet
Just so long as it's not
Posted on Tue, 08 Oct 2024
Just so long as it's not direct debit, as then they can put it up without telling. And she might find it really hard to unsubscribe. (Or, maybe she could ask for Spencer to get really brainy as an update and he could unsubscribe for her? Would he...
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A brave and beautiful
Posted on Mon, 07 Oct 2024
A brave and beautiful poem from Jenny is Pick of the Day! Please do share if you can
Read full commentPosted in Magic Of Youth
Hi Jenny, thankyou for this
Posted on Mon, 07 Oct 2024
Hi Jenny, thankyou for this lovely poem, I can imagine you very clearly, looking up at the gulls :0) I love watching them too, sure they are enjoying flying, riding the wind :0) I have been thinking often about you as the days get closer to 11th...
Read full commentPosted in Magic Of Youth
I liked this very much, feel
Posted on Mon, 07 Oct 2024
I liked this very much, feel cruel when lifting something in the garden, turn the woodlice world upside down, had never thought of it being like being forced to confront the endless sky. How lies can be more understandable, more comforting than...
Read full commentPosted in Prospecting
I loved your description of
Posted on Tue, 08 Oct 2024
I loved your description of being a tom-boy and play-fighting :0) You have brought happy family life and care and love into your poem about toys. Cross-eyed Bear made me smile, too. I guess not wanting the train set but being interested in your...
Read full commentPosted in Kathleen, Gladly, Teleri
Lovely to read another
Posted on Sun, 06 Oct 2024
Lovely to read another instalment of your super story :0) I loved Willow's purr magic!
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 19
WONDERFUL to read! Thankyou
Posted on Sun, 06 Oct 2024
WONDERFUL to read! Thankyou so much for posting
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I hope Archibald didn't carry
Posted on Fri, 04 Oct 2024
I hope Archibald didn't carry the tea trolley back, then put the wheel on when he got there, sort of thing he might do :0) you have put the cliffhanger in the middle for a change. I am trying to think Who is it the detectives are going to find...
Read full commentPosted in Walking on Sunshine (Dead Reckoning series - Part 29)
I find this beautiful,
Posted on Fri, 04 Oct 2024
I find this beautiful, stripping the mind right down, and finding love
Read full commentPosted in Gift: A Son's Story (extract) - Reflection
My son is often asking where
Posted on Thu, 03 Oct 2024
My son is often asking where I would most like to go, and I say a Greek island, because of Gerald Durrel. Now because of you, too. Very glad your beautiful poem got Pick of the Week. I am so very sorry Crado has not come back yet
Read full commentPosted in The Old Man and the Libyan Sea
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