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point of no return
Billionaires lobbying to avoid tax increase, while number of middle income taxpayers decreases Government can't pay education, social care, and...
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October robin
cold air's become a glitter ball with falling leaves its swirling lights as trees dance round their disco hall in fearful thrill of frosty nights now...
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part 10
Mary jumped back from the hole and went to Wong, always keeping that hole in the web in sight, as if the Monster would burst through any time. "Wake...
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part 9
Wong moved quickly over the fallen leaves, and Mary had to keep doing little runs to keep up. She was doing one of these when Wong stopped! Mary...
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preserving time
When this pan's hot, usually it's dull- full of potatoes or lentils. Tonight, blackberry juice simmers fathomless and darkest purple as the pupil of...
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Poor Vanessa, but her waking
Posted on Thu, 07 Nov 2024
Poor Vanessa, but her waking up is so funny :0) How DREADFUL her birthday is turning out! And then "‘Could be the menopause. How old are you again? We need to do some fact checking later and see what is typical for your age group. Ageing is a...
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Hi Jenny, thankyou very much
Posted on Thu, 07 Nov 2024
Hi Jenny, thankyou very much for this update, am so glad the operation is done now, and hope you are able to get out and about to see the trees again soon. Your account is very brave
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I love how you conjure trees
Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2024
I love how you conjure trees with "vaulted". And the long majestic sounds of "numinous looms" and "gull", contrasting with your coffee grounds pun (I liked that too) and the satsuma no longer solid. I can easily imagine finding a mouldy satsuma...
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love all your word sounds -
Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2024
love all your word sounds - that last part specially, and the rhythm you create it is like billowing flames suddenly darting out as the wind changes. The poem gets more energy as it progresses, evoking the fear of uncontrolled fire, and then the...
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This is beautiful. "I let it
Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2024
This is beautiful. "I let it hold me in its stirrings" is perfect for that need to look deep into flames, not look away, as if in respect for what is happening to the trees, their long lives.
" everything
that was long and lost....
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I am so sorry to hear that! I
Posted on Tue, 05 Nov 2024
I am so sorry to hear that! I hope it has been recognised to be through no fault of your own
Read full commentPosted in On the Shelf Again, so to speak! By Alfred N.Muggins
That IS an interesting twist!
Posted on Sun, 03 Nov 2024
That IS an interesting twist! Poor Martha! Just when it seemed super complicated already!
Read full commentLoved "fur" elise doorbell :0)
Posted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 22
To start with, it seemed the
Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2024
To start with, it seemed the dream country, somewhere anyone could earn a living by writing. But if all the writing is rubbish there, (because no one has to try, maybe?) why would anyone want to read? Even a good writer's mind might become...
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OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!! What a
Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2024
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!! What a plot twist! Didn't see that one coming :0) Masterful storytelling!
Read full commentPosted in Strange Brew (Dead Reckoning series - Part 33)
Fabulous rhymes Luigi! Very
Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2024
Fabulous rhymes Luigi! Very enjoyable altogether :0) Gave me a strange impression of camels loaded up with cock-tail cabinets trekking across the desert
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