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part 5
The car bump ing as Karen drove off the ferry woke Mary from a bad dream - a huge spiderweb dangling with bundles like sad grey fruit, soft and...
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part 4
But Mary had no room for words. Her fear was big as a mountain. Tears spilled and a huge sob, like a tidal wave came up from her chest. The seagull...
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part 3 (redrafted)
Mary's heart was going "Boom, boom, boom" shaking her ribs. It was the only sound she could hear. Then Jake was there, shouting, "Can I have icecream...
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part 2
Mary couldn't help laughing too, the first proper laugh since that Tuesday after school when she had not been allowed to go with Mum, then everyone...
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part 1
She hunched down into the car seat so her coat went up on each side like shields. It didn't stop him from kicking her, but he couldn't see she was...
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that's a FABULOUS first line!
Posted on Mon, 30 Sep 2024
that's a FABULOUS first line! I LOVED this poem :0) "imprints of history get washed away". Wonderful
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looking forward to part 2
Posted on Mon, 30 Sep 2024
looking forward to part 2. This is a wonderful set of characters! I loved (well, that's perhaps not the right word) the detail about the Barbie doll's hair :0)
Read full commentPosted in Yard Sale Chapter 1
It's not just that you have
Posted on Fri, 27 Sep 2024
It's not just that you have that fantastic memory, it's how you put everything together, carry the reader along with you! Real gift
Read full commentPosted in Dogsbody (1)
Ah. Wanting arguments sounds
Posted on Wed, 25 Sep 2024
Ah. Wanting arguments sounds like Vanessa feels there's too much smoothness, she wants texture and that means splinters, blisters, callouses in emotion? I am really looking forward to this conjured up argument :0) I do like how you cover the...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you...Part 35
I am SO GLAD you have kept
Posted on Wed, 25 Sep 2024
I am SO GLAD you have kept going with these :0)
Read full commentPosted in Unleashed
Brilliant! Thankyou for such
Posted on Wed, 25 Sep 2024
Brilliant! Thankyou for such a fabulous IP response, Rhiannon! I loved the rhythm and rhyme, too, but also liked very much the hearing and sight and feeling at the start, then the last bit thinking and wondering. I looked up the poem you...
Read full commentPosted in Visible signs of the invisible
Another marvellous piece of
Posted on Tue, 24 Sep 2024
Another marvellous piece of writing from HarryC, this one about childhood experiences is Pick of the Day! Please do share if you can
Read full commentPosted in Tom Tom Turnaround (2)
Thankyou so much for this
Posted on Sat, 21 Sep 2024
Thankyou so much for this lovely response to the IP Jenny! I hope you are having a good day today xxx
Read full commentPosted in Enchanted insects
I really like how Jeannie is
Posted on Fri, 20 Sep 2024
I really like how Jeannie is developing into such an interesting character! And another whopper of a cliffhanger!!!
Read full commentPosted in Bring Him Home (Dead Reckoning series - Part 27)
This well argued piece on the
Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2024
This well argued piece on the implications of AI is Pick of the Day! Please do share if you can
Read full commentPosted in Where Are We Now? Ted Kaczynski and Technological Society
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