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flotsam and jetsam
On the beach, among litter a herring gull fledgeling, dead beside a Happy Birthday balloon background : Soothed in vast freedom and insouciance of...
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jormungandr
Some things will never change. At Summer's height bright as a plastic butterfly, the Fair unpacks on the Prom.
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suddenly
Grey cloud-palm presses down crushed air trees still as puppets hanging from their strings waiting a hiss across fields...... becomes patter on...
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fallow
A sheet of tall stemmed notes, soft rushes, grow yellow-ochre, golden-green, and with brown flower rests rustling, make fresh glissando tides of...
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Alternative Currency
Gold heavy galleons, round hulls banded velvet black, yellow, orange, white, sail- wings catching rainbows make their own wind between ports - wide...
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You make a really good point,
Posted on Sat, 26 Oct 2024
You make a really good point, without letting your emotions overcome you, which is more than I have been able to do, the times I have tried the last few months!
Read full commentPosted in If Netanyahu and the Israelis should invade Britain? (Don’t panic! It’s only History repeating itself!) by Alfred N.Muggins
"In the middle of the box was
Posted on Wed, 30 Oct 2024
"In the middle of the box was a circular glass lens, a black pupil surrounded by a luminous red iris." made me think of Sauron, not Hal :0) Glad the narrator made it out! And that Fritz was not Sauron, that he gave all his former students choice...
Read full commentPosted in Who Wants to Live Forever?
I am looking forward to the
Posted on Sun, 27 Oct 2024
I am looking forward to the crescendo! It will be sad if there are to be no more outings for Perfidia, she is a BRILLIANT character - don't suppose she could set up a detective agency of her own, with Chaos? Would love to see her outwitting some...
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So interesting how you are
Posted on Sun, 27 Oct 2024
So interesting how you are unfolding Perfidia's character, this fragility. And Daphne softening up, too. You are building up to an explosive dinner party!!!
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"It's clear that I can't
Posted on Mon, 28 Oct 2024
"It's clear that I can't communicate with these people" that's the saddest line, as maybe if he had been able to, before, whatever happened to cause him to become a ghost could have been averted.
Read full commentGreat build up of tension with the short...
Posted in Ghost Story
wise words
Posted on Sat, 26 Oct 2024
wise words
Read full commentPosted in If Netanyahu and the Israelis should invade Britain? (Don’t panic! It’s only History repeating itself!) by Alfred N.Muggins
If he ended up so like the
Posted on Sun, 27 Oct 2024
If with all emotional up-grades he ended up so like the kind of person Vanessa bought him to get a break from, would he guilt trip her so much she could not take him back to Cybermates? It would not be like a divorce at all, would it? (imagine...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for You..Part 39
"And that man on the
Posted on Sun, 27 Oct 2024
"And that man on the television, Jeremy Paxman, I don’t think I like him.’" That's so funny :0)
Read full commentThe two strands you have : one of Vanessa feeing manipulated by Cybermates (am beginning to wonder if they are a company created by robots) and...
Posted in Parcel for You..Part 39
Oh! GOOD LUCK!!!! Hope all
Posted on Mon, 07 Oct 2024
Oh! GOOD LUCK!!!! Hope all goes really well XXX
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This made me think of women
Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2024
This made me think of women refugees in Sudan talking on the news recently. Everyone in the gathering had been raped. The reporter asked why no one of them had mentioned it, and one by one, they said that no one cared
Read full commentPosted in You picked the wrong time to ask.
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