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Give Me the Moonlight

By luigi_pagano on Thu, 25 May 2023

At large in Amsterdam. - 500 words - Image from Pixabay

Romance

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Going Dutch (edited)

By luigi_pagano on Tue, 23 May 2023

Amsterdam, here we come. - 600 words- Image from Pixabay

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The Master Plan

By luigi_pagano on Mon, 22 May 2023

540 words - Image from Pixabay

Inspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)

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Three Men and a Car

By luigi_pagano on Sun, 21 May 2023

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Autobiography

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It was all in good fun, Di.

Posted on Sun, 12 May 2019

It was all in good fun, Di. No one took the contest seriously and everybody had a good time.
In retrospect the introduction of an 'interloper' in our team - even though irregular - might have been to our advantage as his presence may have...

Posted in The Cinderella Team

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It was a noble gesture on

Posted on Tue, 14 May 2019

It was a noble gesture on your part, Rhiannon, and you taught a valuable lesson to those girls. Good on you.

Luigi x

Posted in An unsought win

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Very topical and relevant, Di

Posted on Mon, 13 May 2019

Very topical and relevant, Di. Well done.

Luigi x

Posted in bluebells

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I am speechless. This has

Posted on Mon, 06 May 2019

I am speechless. This has proved to be my most fruitful week yet.
I feel privileged to have received this accolade considering the array of talented authors whose work continues to reach the pinnacle on ABC.
My thanks to all who have...

Posted in A Roman Triptych - 1) Calpurnia's Story

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Hello Di

Posted on Wed, 08 May 2019

Hello Di
I am glad you enjoyed the story seen by three characters and described from their own particular perspective.
All through history people have interpreted facts and theories according to their beliefs or their own interest and...

Posted in A Roman Triptych - 3) Artemisia's Story

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Wonderful metaphor, Di, and

Posted on Tue, 30 Apr 2019

Wonderful metaphor, Di, and good rhymes and rhythm.

Luigix

Posted in rock

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I like this original analogy

Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2019

I like this original analogy comparing houses to envelopes. Although at first it doesn't look as if they have anything in common, the similarity between the two becomes clearer when we consider what happens within both. The occupants of buildings...

Posted in change of address

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Hello Di. Thanks for the kind

Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2019

Hello Di. Thanks for the kind words,much appreciated, but basically what I have done is 'borrow' some great lines by great poets to create a new poem with which, in all modesty, I was quite pleased. The Notre Dame fire was the catalyst that made...

Posted in London's Burning

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A lovely descriptive poem, Di

Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2019

A lovely descriptive poem, Di, with the first three lines as an introduction that grabs the readers' attention right away. The verses that follow reveal that something as mundane as a walk to the shops evoke feelings so deep that one can easily...

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Good use of the language,

Posted on Wed, 27 Mar 2019

Good use of the language, Jane. I like 'orbicular shapes' and the crafty suggestion that Barry Gorringe might rhyme with orange as no other rhymes come readily to mind. I seem to have read that 'door hinge' would be suitable.
I too was...