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Eight-lines stanzas. I am
Posted on Wed, 13 Mar 2019
Eight-lines stanzas. I am impressed, Jane. I thought the poem very amusing, what with the lippety lippety rabbits and the strange fellow with the brillo fuzz, not forgetting the main protagonists, the whippets. Brilliant.
You have stuck to the technical brief exceptionally well, Jane. The fact that you were able to cope with the unfortunate situation by composing a little poetic gem is admirable - although small consolation for losing your job.
Your description of the various feelings that looks can generate is spot on, Graham. They can mean love, passion, jealousy and even hostility. The latter attribute reminds me of the sixties when confrontational Teddy Boys used the expression "wot...
Oddly enough, Di, this poem brings to mind the principles of the economic law of diminishing returns: you can invest more and more resources but eventually a saturation point will be reached. It is a meataphor for life itself as your piece...
Hi Hilary. This tale highlights the hidden dangers awaiting vulnerable women and is redolent of Suzy Lamplugh's fate. She was an estate agent who was going to show a prospective client a property when she disappeared without trace.
It is...
Eight-lines stanzas. I am
Posted on Wed, 13 Mar 2019
Eight-lines stanzas. I am impressed, Jane. I thought the poem very amusing, what with the lippety lippety rabbits and the strange fellow with the brillo fuzz, not forgetting the main protagonists, the whippets. Brilliant.
Best, Luigi...
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You have stuck to the
Posted on Tue, 12 Mar 2019
You have stuck to the technical brief exceptionally well, Jane. The fact that you were able to cope with the unfortunate situation by composing a little poetic gem is admirable - although small consolation for losing your job.
Best wishes...
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Your description of the
Posted on Sun, 17 Feb 2019
Your description of the various feelings that looks can generate is spot on, Graham. They can mean love, passion, jealousy and even hostility. The latter attribute reminds me of the sixties when confrontational Teddy Boys used the expression "wot...
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Ed this is excellent. The
Posted on Thu, 14 Feb 2019
Ed this is excellent. The third stanza is my favourite but I enjoyed the whole poem.
In my opinion it should be Pick of the Day.
Best, Luigi
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Oddily enough, Di, this poem
Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019
Oddly enough, Di, this poem brings to mind the principles of the economic law of diminishing returns: you can invest more and more resources but eventually a saturation point will be reached. It is a meataphor for life itself as your piece...
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I thoroughly agree that it
Posted on Fri, 08 Feb 2019
I thoroughly agree that it wouldn't be a wise move!
Luigi x
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A great description of this
Posted on Sat, 02 Feb 2019
A great description of this aristocratic bird, Rhiannon. You always show the environment at its best with style.
Luigi x
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A wish list that will be
Posted on Mon, 17 Dec 2018
A wish list that will be familiar to many. An enjoyable read skillfully written.
Best, Luigi x
P.S. Query: a typo on the second line of the final stanza? ...to the the
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A classy write. I enjoyed
Posted on Mon, 10 Dec 2018
A classy write. I enjoyed the read.
Best, Luigi
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Hi Hilary. This tale
Posted on Tue, 20 Nov 2018
Hi Hilary. This tale highlights the hidden dangers awaiting vulnerable women and is redolent of Suzy Lamplugh's fate. She was an estate agent who was going to show a prospective client a property when she disappeared without trace.
Read full commentIt is...
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