After Pam Ayres's "I Wish I'd Looked After My Teeth". It is a parody I wrote in 2008 that I hope reflects the jocularity and fun of the original piece - Image from Pixabay
I like the reference to Zeus being reminded by this small flower that it needed a name. I can hear its little voice piping up: “forget me not!”.
The link to the passage of time and mortality is very pertinent and makes us reflect on how...
Your writings always describe beautifully your love and appreciation of nature's beauty, Jenny. even though the hot and sultry weather somehow spoils the enjoyment.
I don't know what temperature you have in your parts of the woods; here at...
Dear Jenny, this title of your inspirational poem hinting at passion and love has prompted me to write a piece about this flower in a different context. I always enjoy reading your delicate verses.
Dear Jenny, I concur with all the comments. It is indeed a beautiful poem and I'm sure you'll forgive me if I am so pedantic as to point out two very tiny things: I would add the article 'the' in front of moon in the first line and an apostrophe...
A satisfying walk in all
Posted on Thu, 04 Aug 2022
A satisfying walk in all respects, Rhiannon. Well done and congratulations on Pick of the day.
Luigi x
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I like the reference to Zeus
Posted on Wed, 27 Jul 2022
I like the reference to Zeus being reminded by this small flower that it needed a name. I can hear its little voice piping up: “forget me not!”.
Read full commentThe link to the passage of time and mortality is very pertinent and makes us reflect on how...
Posted in Forget-Me-Not
A lovely atmospheric poem, Ed
Posted on Fri, 22 Jul 2022
A lovely atmospheric poem, Ed. Enjoyed it very much.
Best, Luigi
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Your writings always describe
Posted on Sat, 16 Jul 2022
Your writings always describe beautifully your love and appreciation of nature's beauty, Jenny. even though the hot and sultry weather somehow spoils the enjoyment.
Read full commentI don't know what temperature you have in your parts of the woods; here at...
Posted in Silver Birch
I'll join you in this virtual
Posted on Thu, 16 Jun 2022
I'll join you in this virtual journey, if I may, Jenny. No too much walking, mind, as I'm getting on a bit. ...
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Dear Jenny, this title of
Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022
Dear Jenny, this title of your inspirational poem hinting at passion and love has prompted me to write a piece about this flower in a different context. I always enjoy reading your delicate verses.
Luigi xx
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A very imaginative
Posted on Thu, 02 Jun 2022
A very imaginative interpretation of a romantic scenario, Jenny, full of flair and rhythm.
Luigi xx
Posted in Leaving The Nest
Dear Jenny, I concur with all
Posted on Mon, 23 May 2022
Dear Jenny, I concur with all the comments. It is indeed a beautiful poem and I'm sure you'll forgive me if I am so pedantic as to point out two very tiny things: I would add the article 'the' in front of moon in the first line and an apostrophe...
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A spiritual panoramic vista
Posted on Mon, 16 May 2022
A spiritual panoramic vista to gladden one's eye. Well done, Jenny, on this fluent poem.
Luigi x
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As I have said previously,
Posted on Wed, 13 Apr 2022
As I have said previously, your love of Nature, sparkles through your poetry, as this little nugget demonstrates.
Luigi x
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