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Leggings - development
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The rumours fly, the Beast woman herself, secure in her self image of the woman who is the woman for all men, above all others. Decided on a target,...
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Leggings - update
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By night they come a wandering from the depths of the world to the sirens call,as I lay sleepy at the end of the torture period. Gift giving is their...
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My Past... Your Present.
taken from my medium post on... https://medium.com/@rosalind.j.lee/my-part-in-the-holocaust-2ab5e8ebf749 My Part in the Holocaust. It’s hard to...
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November
If November ushers in the winter with the ice cold winds, and the dry star crossed skies are innocent… of sin, then why are we so transparent in our...
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Dereham Has Discovered Carlott!
This is a social experiment in progress in a nearby town, I've always been interested in social experiments - because when they are done informally - self subscribed too, etc, there is a lovely mix of intergration, and lots of commentaries about their situation in their buying.
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I really like the flow that
Posted on Sat, 03 May 2014
I really like the flow that you've put into this paragraph poem. I do feel however to improve it you should take some time to read it aloud to yourself, then you can hear/feel/see where you can make your poem work much smoother. You will find...
Read full commentPosted in The Happiness is Arriving
Loved it for the humour and
Posted on Sat, 03 May 2014
Loved it for the humour and authenticity. I keep on getting emails from such people, it''s a great pity they are the wrong sex and want a partner with a big one... lol!
Read full commentPosted in A Russian Doll
yes loved the interaction,
Posted on Mon, 28 Apr 2014
yes loved the interaction, you got so well in there, and at the end it was a surprise to find out that he did not recall a friendship... lovely way to put thiings.
Read full commentPosted in A Weekend with Vladimir Putin
Enjoyed, I feel you are over
Posted on Sun, 02 Feb 2014
Enjoyed, I feel you are over reaching for the sake of the rhymes through in two places.
Read full commentPosted in DRIP
I really liked this poem, and
Posted on Thu, 26 Dec 2013
I really liked this poem, and yet wondered if it would do better broken into stanzas, especially if you were to read it aloud, a break is possible after oxygen? and then after 'past you've never shared..'
shall i shut up now>lol
Read full commentPosted in Consistence
try awake dreaming then you
Posted on Wed, 18 Dec 2013
try awake dreaming then you have control, even if you just have enough to be able to wake up.
ps. I like your work and have tweeted it.. :)
Read full commentPosted in Within a Dream
I found it a bit heavy and
Posted on Wed, 04 Dec 2013
I found it a bit heavy and self opinionated to start yet at the end I was laughing and in sympathy with your character. Nice stuff.
Read full commentPosted in IF I WERE A POLICEMAN
happy divorce day:) sorry I
Posted on Sun, 01 Dec 2013
happy divorce day:) sorry I missed it. You ditched the goat, and found your voice contemplating the loo.
lol. I liked the poem!
Read full commentPosted in New Beginnings (I.P.)
very vivid peice, I love the
Posted on Sun, 01 Dec 2013
very vivid peice, I love the area you chose to site it in. Not sure if this is a real experience. Perhaps that's the magic of this poem. How uncertain is your reader?
Read full commentPosted in Freshwater bay (revised)
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Posted on Sun, 06 Oct 2013
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"modern" psyche's boat...
re-pickling petrified paradigms
to in vague, amber-like obeissance float"
in full flow (WHY HAVE I GOT YELLOW?)
YOU'RE BRILLIANT. SOME OVERUSE AND REPITION NEAR TO THE START. LOL....
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