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Vernal Equinox

By marandina on Tue, 16 Mar 2021

Winter shuffled its weary feet, stoical snowdrops bowed ivory heads, crocuses broke free from frozen earth, as daffodils and tulips sprang into new...

Nature

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Black Holes and Revelations

By marandina on Wed, 10 Mar 2021

Virgin light skimmed a newborn sky, shards shimmered, brokered a diurnal vista, an eternal journey fired once more, beatific beams embarked on their...

Spiritual

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New Amsterdam

By marandina on Wed, 03 Mar 2021

Our electric train glided to a stop, humanity spilled onto waiting platforms, worn stairs signposted sidewalk Heaven, steam rose from polluted Subway...

Travel

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Forgotten Souls

By marandina on Wed, 24 Feb 2021

I see you late at night, as daylight’s candle flickers out, empyrean canvas painted black, stars of alabaster speak in hushed tones. Moonlight beams...

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Ah...next time I'm in the

Posted on Tue, 07 Nov 2023

Ah...next time I'm in the cereal aisle emitting heavy sighs I will know I am in "depressed man setting." You have created a wonderful character in Spencer, Jane. Looking forward to reading more :)

Posted in Parcel for you...Part 7

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A beguiling story. Nicely

Posted on Sun, 05 Nov 2023

A beguiling story. Nicely constructed with an eco message and a sinister finale. I could visualise the settings which added so much depth to the tale, figuratively and literally. Great stuff, Sim. Paul

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Netanyahu is hinting at

Posted on Mon, 06 Nov 2023

Netanyahu is hinting at indefinite control over Gaza now moving away from the stance of cutting all ties once Hamas is defeated. This does not bode well for any kind of peace in this region. I'm afraid this instability and violence could go on...

Posted in The Book of Alfred the Great II (Muggins!), as written by that famous prophet of Past Present and Future!

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Hi Jean. The journey

Posted on Mon, 06 Nov 2023

Hi Jean. The journey continues and you take us with you in your writing. It's a rollercoaster for sure and we are all rooting for you. You are one of the bravest people I know. Keep smiling and stay positive. Yes, definitely an inspiration. As...

Posted in chemo 2 - session 2

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"Fizzy fireworks, sparkling

Posted on Thu, 02 Nov 2023

"Fizzy fireworks, sparkling lights:
no fear here
of ghosts or bombs.."

The joy just jumps out of this poem. Perfect for this time of year. Just lovely, Rhiannon :)

Posted in Firework party, a little early

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Some interesting historical

Posted on Tue, 31 Oct 2023

Some interesting historical comparisons and interesting that these may be your own thoughts rather than rogue reporter - Alfred Muggins. Civilians are inevitably the innocent victims of war. We continue to hope for common sense to prevail.

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All caught up again. It feels

Posted on Tue, 31 Oct 2023

All caught up again. It feels like the story is moving from comedic to exploring the emotional consequences of this scenario. That's a substantial well to tap into. Looking forward to reading more :)

Posted in Parcel for you....Part 6

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Still following, Penny. That

Posted on Mon, 30 Oct 2023

Still following, Penny. That's a cliffhanger last line. Looking forward to the next instalment :)

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I'm glad I read it all. Just

Posted on Sat, 28 Oct 2023

I'm glad I read it all. Just perfect for Halloween. I do love Gothic horror and the older tales from the likes of Poe and Irving. Skilfully done, Penny.

Posted in "Spirit of Sleepy Hollow on All Hallows Eve" Part 4 of 4

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"...symbolic and transient

Posted on Mon, 30 Oct 2023

"...symbolic and transient

like sprinkling of fairy

dust on a magical dream."

Such moving notes at the end of the poem. A beautiful tribute to your parents. Nicely done, Jenny.