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This world

By hoalarg1 on Fri, 12 Jul 2024

A 3 line poem

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rain

By hoalarg1 on Wed, 10 Jul 2024

I stood in the rain today...

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summer

By hoalarg1 on Wed, 26 Jun 2024

It's as if the past had never been...

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Spring

By hoalarg1 on Fri, 12 Apr 2024

The weight is over, glass half full upon us, for spring is here...

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12 of my comments have received 12 Great Feedback votes

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Just sublime. I can reach out

Posted on Sat, 30 Apr 2022

Just sublime. I can reach out and feel the delicacy of every word, fragile yet strong.

'soft as forgetting' - wonderful!

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I enjoyed this poem. I liked

Posted on Mon, 06 Sep 2021

I enjoyed this poem. I liked the way it got more frenzied as it went on, unfortunately a bit like the addiction itself.

If the money each week is saved, after ten years you've got yourself over a grand. That's not a bad win!

Posted in Being Careful What You Wish For

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Really captured the scene

Posted on Wed, 02 Sep 2020

Really captured the scene well, like some niftily produced video footage.

I particularly enjoyed verse 3.

Posted in Peace In The Forest

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This is wonderful. So

Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2020

This is wonderful. So evocative, with some lovely details - too many to pick and highlight.

A real transporter. I completely felt like I was there waiting for the saveloys to arrive, the smell driving me insane after a hard day's graft. I...

Posted in The Pub

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I enjoyed how this overflowed

Posted on Sat, 30 Nov 2019

I enjoyed how this overflowed with content despite its brevity. A hard feat to pull off. Well done.

Posted in The End of a Brighter November Day

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Very well written. You have

Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019

Very well written. You have captured the moment perfectly. Dialogue and narration has a good balance.

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Some parts of us are sacred

Posted on Sat, 21 Apr 2018

Some parts of us are sacred and remain safe and untouched; they can be seen by us in nature. A lovely read.

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I'll be honest with you. My

Posted on Sat, 09 Dec 2017

I'll be honest with you. My concentration is poor at the best of times and it takes a lot for me to be able to read a story here all in one go, but this one just kept me reading. You have a really great style of writing. I loved the first person...

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Thanks for the pick, that's

Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2017

Thanks for the pick, that's great. I hope I have added the contribution correctly?

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Well deserved. A really

Posted on Tue, 30 May 2017

Well deserved. A really strong voice threads through this, with great integrity.