BigFish

inspiration from the hobbit - This is the first chapter of my first book. Though i am only 10, I really would appreciate some feedback. Thank you. BigFish. Far north across the globe lays a small island untouched by modern man. It was divided by six governments each representing their own race: the orcs, humans, gremlins, hopplekins, reptoids and goblins. However one hopplekin called Grunfle had achieved what no other race had done before. This is his story.

An old man stared at the vast sea clutching a precious charm. His wooden boat creaked and swayed in the sea while the crew loaded the cannons and prepared the harpoons. The day had come, the war had begun. The sun was almost down when suddenly a large figure rammed the mast of the boat, knocking everyone from their feet. The creature leapt over the crew revealing itself.