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Story | Chances ( 1) | jolono | 10 | 5 years 11 months ago |
Story | Chances ( 2) | jolono | 13 | 5 years 12 months ago |
Forum topic | OU creative writing | Di_Hard | 12 | 5 years 12 months ago |
Story | Outside In | Ewan | 4 | 6 years 2 days ago |
Story | The Drag | tin cup | 1 | 6 years 5 days ago |
Story | Appetitus Mortiferum (London) | Jane Hyphen | 20 | 6 years 1 week ago |
Story | Security At A Price. | jolono | 6 | 6 years 2 weeks ago |
Story | Gabby | jolono | 9 | 6 years 2 weeks ago |
Blog entry | Eastendbutchers Short Story Collection. | jolono | 6 | 6 years 2 weeks ago |
Story | Monroe ( 10) | jolono | 7 | 6 years 4 weeks ago |
Story | Monroe ( 9) | jolono | 5 | 6 years 1 month ago |
Story | Monroe (8) | jolono | 2 | 6 years 1 month ago |
Blog entry | Wilder v Fury | jolono | 1 | 6 years 1 month ago |
Story | Mr Russ. | jolono | 20 | 6 years 1 month ago |
Story | Monroe ( 7) | jolono | 2 | 6 years 1 month ago |
Story | I can't Sleep | francisraymonda... | 5 | 6 years 1 month ago |
Story | Monroe (6) | jolono | 3 | 6 years 1 month ago |
Story | Monroe (5) | jolono | 4 | 6 years 2 months ago |
Story | Monroe (4) | jolono | 4 | 6 years 2 months ago |
Story | Monroe (3) | jolono | 4 | 6 years 2 months ago |
Story | Monroe ( Part 1) | jolono | 10 | 6 years 2 months ago |
Story | Monroe ( 2) | jolono | 12 | 6 years 2 months ago |
Story | The importance of joy | well-wisher | 3 | 6 years 3 months ago |
Story | Gift: A Son's Story (excerpt) | HarryC | 10 | 6 years 3 months ago |
Story | Life In Ties | jolono | 9 | 6 years 3 months ago |
Really like this Tina, like
Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2014
Really like this Tina, like Scratch, I was expecting a poem, but this piece of Prose is brilliant. Love the narrative running through it. Thought at first she was going to have a go at him, then you suprise us with his story. A feeling of love...
Read full commentPosted in Fergal's Wake (I.P.)
Read both of these adventures
Posted on Sat, 14 Jun 2014
Read both of these adventures CM and found myself laughing when I am usually desperately trying to keep quiet. It's just after 6am and my wife is still asleep upstairs. I laughed out loud at the cheese sandwich saga, the dog barked and i can now...
Read full commentPosted in Unbounders Away 2
I have come late to this Luke
Posted on Sat, 24 May 2014
I have come late to this Luke, but became hooked with it after just a few lines on part one. Have now read all four this morning. You have created a new world in this story, a weird, crazy, yet believable world, not an easy thing to do. Great...
Read full commentPosted in The Final Journals of Dr. Peter Lurneman (Journal IV)
A massive warm welcome to the
Posted on Tue, 08 Apr 2014
A massive warm welcome to the site Stuart. Only read two of your pieces so far and both were good. But this...this is stunning. You have a talent for building a story with creative and superb narrative. This is one of the best things I've read on...
Read full commentPosted in edges
I really liked this. I liked
Posted on Wed, 09 Apr 2014
I really liked this. I liked the way it slowly built up. From the first line about hitting his girlfriend to shagging all the drunk slags in Ibiza, it told a great story about Daniel and the kind of man he was. And all this built around a one...
Read full commentPosted in half a man
I love this CM. Wish I'd
Posted on Thu, 03 Apr 2014
I love this CM. Wish I'd wrote it! It has just the right amount of humour and yet there is a message in their somewhere...
Read it twice now. Wherever Balloch is sounds like a million miles away so seven hours round trip is pretty fast.
Read full commentPosted in happy chappy
I like this. Never saw it
Posted on Sat, 15 Mar 2014
I like this. Never saw it coming until he was at the fridge talking to her. I like the paragraph where you describe the sky as being bruised and the sirens yodel off into the distance. Great lines.
Read full commentPosted in Kessler's Love
Like this alphadog. Says so
Posted on Sat, 15 Mar 2014
Like this alphadog. Says so much without being graphic. Nice one.
Read full commentPosted in waters of love
Hi mate, hope you're well.
Posted on Tue, 14 Jan 2014
Hi mate, hope you're well. This was a triumph of poetry madness. Exactly what I want from a Lavadis piece! Witty, intelligent, original, zany yet beautifully wonderful in its extremes.
Loved it.
Read full commentPosted in Her 64th boyfriend
Just thank god you came home
Posted on Tue, 05 Feb 2013
Just thank god you came home safe and sound Siouxie. But what an experience for a teenager to go through. Great memories, well told.Read full commentPosted in Seventeen - Chapter Three
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