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White Van Man

By Jane Hyphen on Tue, 28 Feb 2023

White van man Ripping up the tarmac With cat guts in the tyre treads And tiny scattered wings Clinging to the wind shield Drill drilling in his ear...
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These are the Legs I Ordered.

By Jane Hyphen on Mon, 13 Feb 2023

These are the legs I ordered The ones I’ve always wanted Strong with shape and form Little in the way of wobble An ideal length with two knees Like...
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The Dream Tax

By Jane Hyphen on Mon, 30 Jan 2023

Dora held her phone a foot or so away from her eyes and squinted while she waited for the text to become less blurry. ‘Oh,’ she exclaimed, ‘I’ve just...
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She said her name was Winter

By Jane Hyphen on Mon, 23 Jan 2023

After the party, I marked her Just as the colours drained In her gelid crystal necklace Blowing out the lights And hushing the wild creatures She was...
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He's Left These Woods

By Jane Hyphen on Tue, 03 Jan 2023

He’s left these woods, Mr Pip slipped quietly through a gap. A quick look back then gone between the trees. Fifteen years ago I held him on my lap as...
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Thank you for the cherries. I

Posted on Tue, 16 May 2023

Thank you for the cherries. I actually enjoy these proverbs, some of them are very amusing, especially when people say them wrong. My inspiration for this was my dad who always used to say, 'what's good for the goose is good for the saucy gander...

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I found this very calming to

Posted on Wed, 10 May 2023

I found this very calming to read. A eulogy of restraint combined with ritual and luminous beauty.

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That sounds wonderful. I

Posted on Tue, 09 May 2023

That sounds wonderful. I googled it and it looks beautiful. All the magic woven into your poems.

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That didn't feel like 5000

Posted on Thu, 27 Apr 2023

That didn't feel like 5000 words, it was so enjoyable and entertaining. 

I'm sorry to hear that you lost your dog, Skye. 

I agree with you re the blurred edges of real life and AI. We already living with the blurred edges of 'real'...

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I love the first line and

Posted on Sat, 22 Apr 2023

I love the first line and from there all the fine details unfold, sparkling nature, reality and clever metaphors. Tiny hearts in feathers is all the promise of spring in a sentence. Very well done and one to return to.

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Some interesting details in

Posted on Wed, 26 Apr 2023

Some interesting details in this. The mix of sadness and science fiction reminds me of some episodes of Dr Who, strangly I was getting Dr Who vibes in part one and in part two you actually mentioned it...

I can imagine getting used to a...

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'emotions sparkle in this

Posted on Mon, 24 Apr 2023

'emotions sparkle in this little birds eyes', I recognise that Jenny. Those little robins really do sparkle with intelligence and are so active, seemingly all year round. Ivy provides a great cover for insects and spiders whcih in turn feed our...

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Interesting the relationship

Posted on Wed, 08 Mar 2023

Interesting the relationship women have with their breasts. I've never really understood why we have them, after all, they don't need to be big to feed a baby. Good luck with your surgery, wishing you all the best for a smooth recovery.

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Roses and bees are very apt

Posted on Wed, 08 Mar 2023

Roses and bees are very apt for International Women's Day. This is very beautiful, Jenny. Through a window there is so much to see and some sights are unchanging whether you are old or young. Once thing is for sure, there is always housework.

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Thank you for reading and

Posted on Mon, 06 Mar 2023

Thank you for reading and commenting, Di. I've had a similar thing with my mum, she gave me a watch chain and I said I was considering using the gold to turn into something I would wear, a plain ring, and she was aghast. Maybe I'll take it to...

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