We had guessed correctly about the noise from the nightclub which kept us awake quite a lot of the night by coming and goings and loud popular music...
The Cambronne Hotel was a fairly modern looking building with a sort of honeycomb of brown panels going up the sides of it. These we later discovered...
It took me awhile to find the beginning of this. It started over a year ago. What dedication that you are still writing it. Very complicated first chapter - but each section has its own hooks. Very good writing.
This poem meant a lot to me. Your description of the grave yard, and the sadness, and then the joy of release and the possible new life. The 10th anniversary of my husband's death is coming up soon. I was thinking the other night...
I enjoyed this too, and although not from the PE point of view, I could identify with the nuns in the school bits. I don't think any Americans would eat pizza with a knife and fork. I was absolutely amazed when my...
Hi again One more
Posted on Mon, 14 Oct 2019
Hi again One more
I think I like this the best of yours that I have read so far. I was walking the length of the whale with you, sharing his memories.
Jean
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Hi again Onemore
Posted on Fri, 04 Oct 2019
Hi again Onemore
I'm not a poet, and couldn't possibly write something as emotional as this.
Well done.
Jean
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Hi Onemore
Posted on Mon, 30 Sep 2019
Hi Onemore
This is very deep and rather disturbing. I hope things don't work out as badly as you think they will.
Jean
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Hi Rhiannon
Posted on Sun, 20 Oct 2019
Hi Rhiannon
A very strong story line with this hymn. Nicely done.
Jean
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Hi Steven
Posted on Tue, 30 Oct 2018
Hi Steven
It took me awhile to find the beginning of this. It started over a year ago. What dedication that you are still writing it. Very complicated first chapter - but each section has its own hooks. Very good writing.
Jean
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Hi Jenny
Posted on Wed, 16 Oct 2019
Hi Jenny
This poem meant a lot to me. Your description of the grave yard, and the sadness, and then the joy of release and the possible new life. The 10th anniversary of my husband's death is coming up soon. I was thinking the other night...
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Hi Rhiannon
Posted on Mon, 16 Sep 2019
Hi Rhiannon
THis would be magic to read to little children. I'm sure your grandchildren would love eit.
Jean
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Hi Rhiannon
Posted on Mon, 19 Aug 2019
Hi Rhiannon
These are so much fun to read. And they certainly have a ring of truth about them.
Jean
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Hi onemore
Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019
Hi onemore
This is so good. You start with the absolute beginning and get more and more complicated and involved in life. Beautifully done.
Jean
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Hi Hudson
Posted on Fri, 02 Aug 2019
Hi Hudson
I enjoyed this too, and although not from the PE point of view, I could identify with the nuns in the school bits. I don't think any Americans would eat pizza with a knife and fork. I was absolutely amazed when my...
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