Before I attended my first music lesson with Mr. Elgar, in 1896, I questioned my older sisters about what he was like as a teacher. “He was employed...
The letter of complaint that I sent to the directors of the company brought forth a very cold and formal letter, informing me that they had received...
Monday January 10 was a very bad day. I got home from play reading, and had lunch and was about to go out to bridge, when I noticed a very bad smell...
I kind of thought you would choose this option. A party to say goodbye seems like a good idea to me too. They have no doubt been a very important part of your life.
Hi Bee
Posted on Mon, 15 Feb 2016
Hi Bee
Very clever this and well thought out. As with all your work, the effort you put into the writing is apparent but also seems natural.
Jean
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Hi Rhiannon
Posted on Tue, 16 Feb 2016
Hi Rhiannon
I like this Valentine's day poem - with both sides of the situation being represented.
Jean
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Hi Rhiannon
Posted on Sun, 07 Feb 2016
Hi Rhiannon
What fun this is to sing along to. You have really made the meaningful lyrics fit in with the melody.
Jean
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Hi Bee
Posted on Fri, 29 Jan 2016
Hi Bee
I think I got that it was about your acceptance of things turning out not to be as bad as anticipated. You do have such a gift with words.
Jean
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HI Tina
Posted on Tue, 05 Jan 2016
HI Tina
What a lovely gift to find this morning - this beautiful story for me to read and enjoy and remember.
Jean
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Hi Bee
Posted on Thu, 24 Dec 2015
Hi Bee
I kind of thought you would choose this option. A party to say goodbye seems like a good idea to me too. They have no doubt been a very important part of your life.
Jean
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Hi Rhiannon
Posted on Tue, 22 Dec 2015
Hi Rhiannon
Lovely, pretty and original.
Jean
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Hi Rhiannon
Posted on Fri, 18 Dec 2015
Hi Rhiannon
I love the alliteration on the birds - goldfinch flock flits for example. You paint a pretty picture.
Jean
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Hi Rhiannon
Posted on Wed, 16 Dec 2015
Hi Rhiannon
Lovely onomotopeic words - however you spell it. It made me feel drippy and dull.
Jean
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HI Rhiannon
Posted on Sun, 29 Nov 2015
HI Rhiannon
Yes, the tune is very familiar to me too, and singing the hymn instead of just saying it, makes it so much more meaningful, I think.
Jean
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