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I have 17 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 462126 times and 170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2215 of my 14,665 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2262 votes

2215 of my comments have received 2262 Great Feedback votes

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Nicely done drew

Posted on Fri, 25 May 2018

Nicely done drew

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Posted in In the Next Breath

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made my head spin by the end!

Posted on Thu, 17 May 2018

Very clever. Made my head spin by the end!

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Posted in Anachronistic Harry

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I hope there's more of this

Posted on Wed, 16 May 2018

I hope there's more of this to come!

ps: you have two 'come over all unnecessary's in a very short space of time - perhaps one needs changing?

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Posted in Crazu the Brave

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You drove me to google as I

Posted on Sun, 13 May 2018

You drove me to google as I hadn't heard of this before and I 'kind of' got the gist before reading the wiki page, but it was much clearer afterwards, so I'm going to leave the link here in case anyone else is as ignorant as me: ...

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Posted in Surasawa Pond

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This one packs a punch London

Posted on Wed, 09 May 2018

This one packs a punch London - some great imagery, it really emphasises the futility of artificial borders. Well done

One thing - are you sure it's calloused to? It's very clear what you're saying, it just sounds a bit odd to me (might...

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Posted in Calloused to Birdsong

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if it makes you feel any

Posted on Thu, 03 May 2018

if it makes you feel any better, I spelt Tuesday wrong until about 5 years ago

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Posted in Romance Killer

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Love this little moment in

Posted on Thu, 03 May 2018

Love this little moment in time. It reminds me of that strange glow colour photos used to have in the sixites and seventies.

One small suggestion - I think it's 'puts paid to' instead of 'pay'

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Posted in Romance Killer

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echoing airyfairy here, both

Posted on Thu, 26 Apr 2018

echoing airyfairy here, both parts such a good read, perfectly paced with believable characters and dialogue. Quite disappointed to hear you don't have plans to continue this - is there anything we can do to twist your arm? (I want to know what...

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Posted in Something Hard Inside Him (Part 2)

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