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I have 17 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 452701 times and 170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2153 of my 14,472 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2203 votes

2153 of my comments have received 2203 Great Feedback votes

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I agree - some lovely rich

Posted on Mon, 29 May 2017

I agree - some lovely rich imagery in this

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Posted in Summer's Entrance.

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You built the atmosphere

Posted on Tue, 23 May 2017

You built the atmosphere really well - all the 'normal stuff' - the slight middle age crisis, the family weekend, the conversation between the girl and the father about the phone's torch. The sudden panic when the girl disappears is convincingly...

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Posted in The Dark - part 2

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Mary-Ann is this meant for

Posted on Sun, 14 May 2017

Mary-Ann is this meant for Poetry Monthly? I'll pop into the correct category if you let me know (or you could do it yourself) : )

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Posted in Into The Blue

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Hooray! Lovely to see Larry

Posted on Fri, 12 May 2017

Hooray! Lovely to see Larry and Mick back!

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Posted in Larry and Mick and the Niftily Deflected Insult

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Takes a while to get going,

Posted on Tue, 09 May 2017

Takes a while to get going, but once there, the pace is good, and the resolution very well done. If you gave this one a big edit, I think it could be a winner!

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Posted in Caiman's bazaar

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Best IP response I've seen so

Posted on Sun, 07 May 2017

Best IP response I've seen so far this week Luigi - well done

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Posted in If You Wait Long Enough By the River...

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That last line is

Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017

That last line is heartbreaking. Thank you for postng this Elsie and please pass that cherry onto your dad

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Posted in Shlamek

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I'm enjoying this Parson. It

Posted on Sat, 29 Apr 2017

I'm enjoying this Parson. It got off to quite a slow start (perhaps a bit of an edit needed there) and in this part I'm suggesting you give your reader a bit more about the characters. Just saying the man looked like a guide at the Jorvik Viking...

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Posted in Boatman's dream 2

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