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This is stunningly beautiful
Posted on Sun, 17 Sep 2017
This is stunningly beautiful Di - it reads like an impressionist painting - so yes, a bit of work needed, but all the better for it. I've been to a few places like this and I know exactly what you mean. A brilliant pick
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Some really interesting
Posted on Sun, 27 Aug 2017
Some really interesting twists and turns in this piece, and I'd love to read another part of it ( I hope there's more to come?)
If you're looking for suggestions, here's one big thing: Are you saying that the 8yr old thought he could lay...
Read full commentPosted in Bringing Charlie Back (Rewrite)
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Posted on Wed, 23 Aug 2017
This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day
Please share/retweet if you like it too!
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Read full commentPosted in Eliza
A great word picture, and the
Posted on Wed, 23 Aug 2017
A great word picture, and the metaphors are strong, never too contrived. Well done
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Very interesting Elsie - a
Posted on Sun, 20 Aug 2017
Very interesting Elsie - a kind of mix of social history and your own personal history. I remember listening to something on radio four - I'm sure it was more recent than 30 years ago - about how many holocaust survivors were only recently...
Read full commentPosted in Outcomes of my Dad's recent Funeral in London
You've managed the dialogue
Posted on Wed, 16 Aug 2017
You've managed the dialogue between Jack and his mum beautifully - very believable, both the spoken and unspoken bits.
One small suggestion:
'he knew it must be late but he daren’t check the time on his phone'
should probably...
Read full commentPosted in Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down (part 7)
Could you put a link here for
Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017
Could you put a link here for us Elsie? I'm sure quite a few of us would like to order a copy
Read full commentPosted in Shlamek
Elsie I just read your sad
Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017
Elsie I just read your sad update too. I'm so sorry to hear the news and send you my sympathies. I hope you will keep this wonderful piece of life writing on here - it's a great tribute to his talent xxxx
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like a little jewel - this is
Posted on Thu, 03 Aug 2017
like a little jewel - this is brilliant. I particularly like the second stanza. Thank you for posting it!
Read full commentPosted in calm before
A good introduction with a
Posted on Sat, 29 Jul 2017
A good introduction with a nicely flowing narrative.
If you're looking for suggestions, for historical accuracy you might want to take another look at the description of the man's background. Did you mean Westminster the school? (there isn...
Read full commentPosted in The Second World War: PART 1 - Roger Farrier - Dunkirk (1940)
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