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I love the cat too di (it's
Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2021
I love the cat too di (it's very Alice in Wonderland) - and you've described the disorientation of the fog really well, but I must say, I'm a bit confused about the grey stuff, and Karen not moving or speaking?
Read full commentPosted in part 6
Great contrast of images in
Posted on Sat, 06 Feb 2021
Great contrast of images in this piece - nicely done
Read full commentPosted in Carpe Diem
A really moving description
Posted on Sat, 06 Feb 2021
A really moving description of the granny - beautifully done - and the interaction between Pearcey and the Dr
One thing though, here:
Pearcey’s been up every day this week awready. His granny’s no farin well. She’s went back intae ...
Read full commentPosted in Just Another Minute
a great ending - driving off
Posted on Sat, 06 Feb 2021
a great ending - driving off in the sunset and hopefully happier things!
Read full commentPosted in Broken wings still fly
it must be really difficult,
Posted on Sat, 16 Jan 2021
it must be really difficult, because it is his story as you say (and how brilliant that he's forgotten) - but it's also your story and I can't even begin to imagine how traumatic it was for you
Read full commentPosted in part 5
I love the jackdaw bits if it
Posted on Sat, 16 Jan 2021
I love the jackdaw bits if it helps! - and I hope you do put more in about what happened, but it's going to be difficult if you're doing it from the child's POV. It's definitely a story that needs to be told
Read full commentPosted in part 5
Where she throws all the
Posted on Sat, 16 Jan 2021
Where she throws all the money into the water - it's so moving. Poor Mary
Read full commentPosted in part 5
Catching up - love the idea
Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2021
Catching up - love the idea of being warm inside with your thoughts, waiting for Spring - thanks for this Jenny!
Read full commentPosted in Drifting On The Muse
we don't have them here as
Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2021
we don't have them here as far as I know, or at least they don't seem to be as unwilded as in some areas - how frightening that they swooped at your cat!! Beautiful creatures though, as is this poem
Read full commentPosted in Herring Gull
You took me right there with
Posted on Thu, 28 Jan 2021
You took me right there with you - thank you, and congratulations on the very well deserved pick!
Read full commentPosted in A Secret Forest
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