monodemo
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I have 442 stories published in
17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 233880 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
Aurora
I stood on a mound of dew kissed blades of grass Overlooking the lake. The reflection of the lights dancing On the waters ripples were like that of...
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Speechless
You stand there with your blackened teeth, And pose with your knife so sharp, You make my choices obsolete, On and on you harp, About killing me, my...
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- 362 reads
You'd be scared too!
You’d be scared too, if you were me! A black toothed man is who I see, He carries around a hunting knife, And constantly threatens to end my life...
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Pink Mist
I open the door , You force your way in, ‘What did I do?’ Said a voice from within. You point your gun Right in my face, In my mind My steps I...
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- 322 reads
Disassociation
My body numb, My emotions stunted, The mind shut down, ‘Help me’ I grunted. The contributor, stress, When will it end? Are you real? Or are you a...
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