monodemo
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I have 442 stories published in
17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 233871 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
forever we shall sleep
A butterfly that lives forever, is not at butterfly at all! That says a great deal about mankind, The eyes the windows to the soul. In blood upon...
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- 472 reads
When it all goes wrong
Today I got dumped, Through a text, I hung my head Totally perplexed. We had talked at two, And then at twenty past, Her whole demeanour Changed, It...
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- 415 reads
Domestic violence
My dream in life Is to flee the violence, I’m sick of living In complete silence! I keep holding on And hope he’ll change, I’m kidding myself His...
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- 405 reads
Tough old girl
Her cough, vicious, Her temperature soars, Sweat exudes From her pores. She has fight, And a powerful mind, Her eyes glassy, She’s now confined. A...
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- 436 reads
Lonely Waters
Oh I long for the salty smell of the harbour, The sun dancing on the water, The mackerel jumping out in the sea, People gathering just to watch Few...
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- 1014 reads