monodemo
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I have 442 stories published in
17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 233803 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
Chapter 1 Acquiring Jacqui part 1
Chapter 1 Acquiring Jacqui Lenny smiled his crooked smile and took another bite of his moreish triple decker BLT sandwich. He was looking out the...
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I cry
Every time I shower, I cry, The sobs muffled only by the boom, boom, boom, of the music I play in the background, my tears washed away by the water...
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White Coats
I entered the asylum at quarter past four, The face of depression had wrapped on my door. Met with a face who repeated a name, Over and over waving...
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First summer rain
I close my eyes as the first summer rain Gently clashes and cascades down the window pane. I look down and see a small pair of army green Wellington...
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The Ocean
I can taste the salt coming from the spray of the high tides Ocean as its waves break against the rocks. As I watch the children play, unbeknownst to...
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