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I liked your use of rhythm
Posted on Thu, 12 Sep 2024
I liked your use of rhythm and rhyme in this, Jenny. It gives the feel of a brief enjoyd visit, refreshed by a short brisk stroll. Did you get to the hospital yesterday for a consultaion? Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Escape To Ridgeway
I know you have written on
Posted on Tue, 10 Sep 2024
I know you have written on these themes before. Are there any churches near to you. You would not have to converse much, most should understand if you indicate you'd rather not. You would need one where the preaching was Biblical and instructive...
Read full commentPosted in Isolated
they do seem to be rather
Posted on Thu, 05 Sep 2024
they do seem to be rather bully-boys don't they? Some of the big seabirds seem so too - they are much bigger than I used to think. Do you have many magpies then? I didn't realise crows ate peanuts! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Contemplating Crows
You subtly show the
Posted on Thu, 05 Sep 2024
You subtly show the inadequacy of really trying to 'receate' a person in film-image and real-time AI-generated dialogue, and his confused unease, leaving the reader to contemplate how unreal any further contact with such a 'hologram' would be....
Read full commentPosted in Ghostbot (Part Two of Two)
So sorry you are going
Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2024
So sorry you are going through such a time, Jenny. A bit like a tunnel in itself. I know what being confined is like, and some difficult pain-pressures, but not like you are enduring at present. I suppose pain relief maybe brings a little easing...
Read full commentPosted in Can Life Get Better?
He's reluctant to open the
Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2024
He's reluctant to open the message, but then to open the link. That latter is what is dangerous, isn't it (as I've often been told!). So there's no danger to opening the message? Did he? And then hover over whether to click on the link, because...
Read full commentPosted in Ghostbot (Part One of Two)
Sensitive telling Seems to
Posted on Wed, 14 Aug 2024
Sensitive telling Seems to have an echo of the parable of the Lost Sheep. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in A Year with the Brighouse Stars Walking Club (December)
One of our grandsons has just
Posted on Mon, 02 Sep 2024
One of our grandsons has just started a year in Budapest postgrad and has been astonished at the heat, but his eczema is much better in it. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in For the Love of Irma Ogden
I was helping with 'help for
Posted on Fri, 30 Aug 2024
I was helping with 'help for families with difficulties with young children' at a time when Asperghers started to get mentioned in meetings of helpers. And I kept thinking as aspects of it were mentioned, 'Oh, that sounds like my youngest son's...
Read full commentPosted in Gift: A Son's Story (extract) - Respite
So many memories there to be
Posted on Wed, 28 Aug 2024
So many memories there to be touched and remembered together and talked of, and still the delight of doing so together whatever ups and downs they had gone through together down the many years. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in What happened when Grandpa gave Grandma a miniature doll’s hardware shop on their 55th year anniversary
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