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I have 2015 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 4101644 times and 622 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Journeying over the gulf

Can I go back? Can we heal the rift? … so far a journey, a gulf so wide

Wall Decoration

Red brick wall, patch of crumbling mortar: roots take hold, space fills so greenery, sprinkled with pointed bells of blue campanula spills over:...

Wherever

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] It is too wonderful to plumb how wide and full your scanning sight, your knowledge of my inmost thought, in...
Cherry

Shiny Brown

Rain or sun we’ll have fun in the squelchy and squishy jump and splash it thickly melted-chocolate sticky of the path in the wood today: bluebells...
Cherry

Elusive Silver

An enigmatic colour this on the scales of a herring or a ‘silverfish,’ and the reflecting sheen of a mirror’s screen, greyer than white, whiter than...
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1468 of my comments have received 1510 Great Feedback votes

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The German Government soon

Posted on Sat, 22 Oct 2016

The German Government soon rewarded him with a detainee officer’s pay of $2.50 per week.” Does that mean he was a prisoner of war not an internee? Or, I suppose, maybe it means he was in US at the outbreak of war, so wouldn't be...

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Posted in Chet and the Prisoners - 12

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 … but the signs of the new

Posted on Fri, 21 Oct 2016

 … but the signs of the new cloaking to come are there in the buds!

I like the encouragement to pause a moment, and listen, look at something more closely, Richard, and 'visiting feral feathers' has its humour! Rhiannon

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Posted in A Tree Branch

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Hi, Richard. I like 'wept'.

Posted on Thu, 20 Oct 2016

Hi, Richard. I like 'wept'.

'Follow me' is for others to click on as everyone has a section (under 'Read' on the right hand side of the screen) of 'Authors you follow'. If you click on anyone else's 'Follow me' their link should then be on...

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Posted in Environmental Interlude

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Interesting little picture. I

Posted on Tue, 18 Oct 2016

Interesting little picture. I hadn't heard the word 'polliwog' for tadpole before. Rhiannon

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Posted in The Toe

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Much of interest and

Posted on Mon, 17 Oct 2016

Much of interest and informative here. I felt the ease in temperature a little with the snow falling. When he mentions making the furniture, I remembered part of my father's letter about his war experiences when they made some furniture, and...

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Posted in Chet and the Prisoners - 8

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Hi, Jean. Didn't the locals

Posted on Tue, 11 Oct 2016

Hi, Jean. Didn't the locals get to whipping around to getting some clothing in it to them? I suppose there was a lot of chaos with so many suddenly going off to war, and the centre was out in the country, but surely those running the camp could...

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Posted in Chet and the Prisoners - 3

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Very interesting. Makes you

Posted on Mon, 10 Oct 2016

Very interesting. Makes you see it from the eyes of such a one caught up in it. Easy to see the necessity of the authorities to do something in a time of war and concern for embedded spies, and also to realise everything got done very hastily,...

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Posted in Chet and the Prisoners - 2

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A vivid scene, tautly told.

Posted on Sun, 02 Oct 2016

A vivid scene, tautly told. Rhiannon

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Posted in The Mystery of Cat

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I don't understand it all,

Posted on Wed, 07 Sep 2016

I don't understand it all, but it doesn't seem to be a picture of the caring God we meet in the Bible, and came to earth with an answer for our sweat and fetters that we have made for ourselves, both now and fulness to come. What the fool...

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Posted in Maker's Mark

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Describing well temptation's

Posted on Tue, 30 Aug 2016

Describing well temptation's voice and the confusing reasoning and depression induced. Showing so clearly the need of a good friend at one's side to help if the cycle is really to be broken, and of course the Holy Spirit's help can make such a...

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Posted in Sober Tomorrow

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