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Men searching, seeking to
Posted on Fri, 27 Nov 2015
Men searching, seeking to understand … get a glimpse, but can't see the whole of the answer … only supernatural revelation can do that, fill in the gaps, even help us understand the words we are told, or as much as we need to know. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in a piece of art
Interestingly put, Tina. So
Posted on Thu, 26 Nov 2015
Interestingly put, Tina. So easy to get distraught over loose ends, and to miss 'jobs' more important or just noticing some beauty, which you so well describe.
(on rainbows, we were thrilled a couple of days ago in seeing a bright wide '...
Read full commentPosted in Ironing Unironed
Brings the era to life, or
Posted on Sat, 21 Nov 2015
Brings the era to life, or its trappings to memory. The longing for hugs is always there, whether the home be relatively poor, or rich, and whether we have them or don't, the value of them remains clearly felt. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in For Sale - Sold as Seen
At least he knew he didn't
Posted on Thu, 19 Nov 2015
At least he knew he didn't look his age! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in The Engagement Party
This would make a lovely
Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2015
This would make a lovely journal entry. And each observation brings in touch or sound as well as colour. It somehow feels tantalizing that you could develop it a bit more. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Summer
The walk around the town, and
Posted on Mon, 27 Jan 2014
The walk around the town, and her irritation over Alfred Jones' visits makes her seem more real, not just a line drawing of someone long ago! The Slug and Lettuce - what a fascinating name for a pub, must be some interesting history to...
Read full commentPosted in Consequences - Chapter 18
This seems a development of
Posted on Mon, 09 Nov 2015
This seems a development of one the other day you took off? But more clearly of the change with aging now. Hard when the touch and the speech and memory decays. The title intrigued me as I've been working on one entitled 'Show and tell', but at...
Read full commentPosted in Kiss and Tell (Poetry Monthly)
It is so nice to have
Posted on Fri, 06 Nov 2015
It is so nice to have attention drawn to the detail of one little flower. You notice so much more than with a big bloom. I remember looking long at one autumn leaf with a little girl I was helping to look after, and making a poem on that, and her...
Read full commentPosted in In Passing
I like the way you've
Posted on Wed, 04 Nov 2015
I like the way you've captured this bit of escapism, Cassie! 'no cause to hide, I can be who I am'
Read full commentIt does seem a pity when people feel they can't be themselves in the real world, though others use the term 'I'm just being myself...
Posted in what goes up
I catch whisps of where you
Posted on Tue, 03 Nov 2015
I catch whisps of where you are coming from, but then revert to feeling your playing with the reader with a mixture of eerie and trying to provoke discomfort, always with your rolling rhymes and rhythm, mixing a real message with a bit of...
Read full commentPosted in Limbo
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