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I have 88 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 540773 times and 90 of my stories have been cherry picked.
72 of my 2,234 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 74 votes

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Coral Jane

Mother and Daughter.

I joined Abctales in 2010 and my daughter Julia a year later (2011). Unfortunately due to ill health, despite having been a prolific writer since childhood, she only managed to post a small number of pieces whilst active on the site. Following her unexpected and preventable death in 2016, I posted more of her poems on my own account under her username, which seemed a logical step at the time.

In 2019 her entire body of work was published by Cerasuspoetry.com in a book entitled WAITING FOR ANOTHER VELVET MORNING, which is still available on Amazon (proceeds to charity}. Her original work still remains on her account Overthetop.

I don't write as much now, though the occasional piece pops up once in a while.

Coral Jane Macpherson (seashore)
Julia Jane Macpherson (Overthetop1) deceased in 2016

My stories

Me, Matisse and the Snail (IP)

Re-hashed version of previous piece - am now deleting version 1 as no point in having two Snail pieces around and I think this one works better (I hope).
Cherry

No daisy chains

Pink Floyd meets John Bunyan, in a manner of speaking
Cherry

The way we were

unfinished symphonies
Cherry

Conceptual

with a little help from Damien Hirst (though of course he doesn't know it)
Cherry

Poppies for my daughter

Re-write of last year's version -not at all sure about poem but determined to crack the `add image' option. Hope it works...

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72 of my comments have received 74 Great Feedback votes

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I think I'm of the same

Posted on Sun, 27 Nov 2016

I think I'm of the same generation, as all these names were familiar to me.  I much enjoyed your potted history of women and their - I mean our - role in history.

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Posted in Other Non Fiction - We Did It Ourselves! (Women's Story from the Dawn of Time to Today)

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My favourite line:

Posted on Sat, 19 Nov 2016

My favourite line:

"Twenty-fifth of December, an invisible day"...

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Posted in No Hand to Hold.

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Eloquently said.

Posted on Fri, 04 Nov 2016

Eloquently said.

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Posted in A Year

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I've read this one several

Posted on Fri, 05 Aug 2016

I've read this one several times, and decided I really like how surreal it is...working class pigeons and blue buses...why not?

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Posted in The garden of earthly preoccupation

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Yes, powerful emotions coming

Posted on Tue, 02 Aug 2016

Yes, powerful emotions coming through the poem, culminating in the one word WHY? x

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Posted in Joanie's Poem

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Great...look forward to

Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2016

Great...look forward to reading edited version.  

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Posted in The Cobbe House part i a dark history.

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Good beginning, if a little

Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2016

Good beginning, if a little long, but the mini-cliffhanger ending leaves the reader curious to know what comes next.  Quite a few typos though, so maybe a bit more editing next time...

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Posted in The Cobbe House part i a dark history.

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You've said it all Ewan, and

Posted on Sat, 16 Jul 2016

You've said it all Ewan, and so well.  Thank you.

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Posted in More Trouble Every Day

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Close to home for me, hence

Posted on Tue, 12 Jul 2016

Close to home for me, hence delay in commenting, but I really liked the way it  was written, so much I read it twice.

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Posted in THE BALLAD OF ANNIE GRAY (Poetry Monthly)

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I'm not sure whether you

Posted on Mon, 11 Jul 2016

I'm not sure whether you meant "liqueur" or "liquor" and apostrophe missing from "don't"...but really I'm nit-picking as I liked this a lot.

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Posted in Addicts

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