The Flying Dandelion

By well-wisher

Thu, 06 Jun 2013
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The dandelion flapped its leaves,
wishing that it could fly.
It loved the winged birds who weaved
about the broad, blue sky
but then, one day, that little weed's
wish started coming true;
it scattered all its feathered seeds
and, on the wind, they flew.

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Submitted by Esther on
Delightful.

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
Nice, neat and funny. Good rhythm too, though I felt I had to read 'wing-ed' as 2 syllables, and wondered if it would be easier therefore with something like 'the flying birds' or 'it loved to see the birds who weaved' - ? Rhiannon