Metro Ligne 1, 19hr 45, today

By 13StopsEastOfWhitechapel

Fri, 11 Jul 2008
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Wrong, I know,
but all the same,
you're eating dinner on the train!
From tupperware
(with metal fork),
it's only natural to gawk.

Rice and
indeterminates;
I feel your pain insatiate.

"Three stops hence
is such a wait,
even though I'd have
a plate."

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Submitted by 13StopsEastOfWh... on
70 or something reads, Is it bad that they're all me? I spent 10 minutes la dessus, The thousand target? Failed to do.

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Submitted by Nymph on
Well I enjoyed it... Reminded me of the late night, post beers burger on the tube! Can't understand why no one else has commented! It does seem that commenting is a rare thing in general.

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Submitted by 13StopsEastOfWh... on
Was rather bizarre, man with decidedly non-fast food on the metro at commuter-o'clock. I'd just tried and failed to write something else, someone had to be a victim, pen was itching for completion. Really appreciate the comment, will resolve to do more of the same. Best.

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