First kiss

By andrew-evans

Tue, 15 Jul 2008
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6 comments
 

The beautiful sapphire eyes,
Long sweeping locks,
Puts my heart in knots,
The slender figure,
The perfect face,
Makes my heart race,
I wonder closer,
Then her hair,
Sways slightly in the breeze,
Coming from outside,
Where a perfect,
Midnight blue sky,
Lays far above,
A short time later,
We are alone,
I pull her close,
And smell a sweet perfume,
We embrace then our lips touch,
Hers soft and tender,
A rush of happiness,
Beyond compare,
Only known by the passion we share.

By Andrew Evans

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Comments

Submitted by Caolan_le_Paddy on
Aww sweet xD

Submitted by andrew-evans on
plz leave comments

 

Submitted by Fallen_Hero on
Wow, your poem's lovely. And inspiring! Keep on writing, I like your style! :) Ms. Louise B

Ms. Louise B

Submitted by andrew-evans on
thanx for the comment. im glad i inspire you and i wil defiently keep on writing.

 

Submitted by Mrs_Schechter on
Awwwwwwww This is really sweet Andy

This place was never the same again
After you came and went
How can you say you meant anything different
To anyone standing alone
On the street with a cigarette
On the first night we met

Submitted by scratch on
Andrew, here you ask for people to "please leave comments" yet in all the time you have been posting your writing you have never done so once yourself?