HOPELESS

By Yazmin

Wed, 01 Oct 2008
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Have you ever had that feeling
Of everything turning out wrong?
Perhaps a song you hate is played
Except worse than that
Life isn't always fun and games
Even happy ever afters
So in the end I came up with a solution
Seeing is believing, and believing is HOPELESS.

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Submitted by Laura Callender on
Some of your writing very much reminds me of myself a few years back, when i had a lot of pain to deal with, and i got it out through writing! From then onwards i realised i really enjoyed writing, and started to develop my skill of putting words together into fictional stories. I hope you keep writing, and showing us all how you are developing. If it helps... i truly believe that people who are not true friends are not worth having!Concentrate on loving you! nothing is hopeless! Em.

Laura

www.collaborativewritingchallenge.com

 

 

Submitted by Yazmin on
Thank you thats exactly how I used to feel, thank you for reading it :)

Yaz