Dear Gustav
By Ewan
Tue, 24 Mar 2009
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Who is Judith?
I am not jealous:
who am I to feel
such an emotion?
Must she too wear
the gold and glass?
And her, the one
from the club in the
Sperlingsgasse?
I am not jealous,
merely curious.
Ah, and the kiss;
who glitters in gold
with my Gustav?
Still you paint them,
these others, with
your living brush
that your Adele
has held tight with
her own hand, ring
turned stone inward.
I am not jealous,
merely dying.
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Possibly Klimt? Cracking
Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on
Possibly Klimt? Cracking stuff from you as usual :-)atb L
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Ewan: A good piece about a
Ewan: A good piece about a visually lush painter, and Adele. Perhaps eliminate the last question and sharpen the immediacy, perhaps
Ah, and the kiss;
who glitters in gold
with my Gustav?
You paint them,
these others, with
your living brush
that your Adele
has held tight with
her own hand, ring
turned stone inward.
I am not jealous,
merely dying.
You're a fertile, and facile fellow. Swep
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