Going For a Song ...
By Silver Spun Sand
Sat, 28 Mar 2009
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Apron for sale – needs
good home;
no kids or cats …
please!
One lady owner;
pre-washed denim
for that lived-in,
vintage look.
Slightly soiled seconds so,
no lifetime guarantees.
Apron for sale – free
to good home.
No strings attached.
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Poignant, wryly funny. So
Poignant, wryly funny. So much in so little, like Hemingway's small ad, or Brautigen's bagatelles.
Very good indeed.
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'No strings attached.' -
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
'No strings attached.' - loved the last line ;) A clever little take on the IP Tina, well done!
Magic xxx
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Brilliant! Hugely enjoyable!
Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Brilliant! Hugely enjoyable!
Chris XX
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Wry and enjoyable :-) atb L
Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on
Wry and enjoyable :-) atb L
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yeah! given me a delightful
yeah!
given me a delightful nudge - sod the house, sod the imminant arrival of parents-in-law, sod the artichokes - i'm gonna finish another bloody chapter.
thanks for a sorely needed dose of rebellion,
great ip - great pome
bises, ax
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I love 'for that lived-in
Permalink Submitted by thanksforthepar... on
I love 'for that lived-in vintage look' really enjoyed reading this poem x
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I have a mug which reads
I have a mug which reads thusly:
'Gardening forever,
housework whenever.'
Says it all, really. We won't be remembered for how clean we were, as you so rightly say, but for the life we leave behind.
Nice one :-)
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