Costa Dreams

By threeleafshamrock

Sat, 25 Jul 2009
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The sun slipped into the cloudy envelope
and was posted; address tomorrow!
Walking the beach as the sky caught fire
and the neon shuddered into pale imitation.

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Submitted by pinda on
So much in so little. Love saying that about poems and it's not very often I say that. good work Chris

Submitted by sarah wilson on
Please send me a postcard:)

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Thanks Pin; usually I have too much to say lol.

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
lol sarah, I'll get a spare ticket and you can come too ;)

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Beautiful, beautiful imagery Chris. Concise and brilliantly put! Magic xxx

 

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Thanks Magic (had initially been longer but didn't work at all). Check out 'Blackbird Rapper meets Seagull Crapper....think you'll like ;)