Cast off the Shroud (Flanders)
By threeleafshamrock
Wed, 07 Oct 2009
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Cast off the shroud of death
and don the cloak of love.
Rise from the poppy laden field;
and stroll with me awhile.
March not, with gritted teeth
while evil sheds its glove.
but take my hand of gratitude;
make my reward, your smile.
Listen as the Skylark sings
in blue and cloudless skies
and childrens' laughter skips
playfully on the summer breeze.
For this, you gave your youth,
for these you gave your lives!
Then return to heroes' ether
and with your brothers; rest in peace
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'Rise from the poppy laden
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
'Rise from the poppy laden field;
and stroll with me awhile.'
- love these lines Chris and really like the two line structure and rhyme scheme ;)
Magic xxx
P.S I want to see an 18 rated poem this Friday so I can comment on it lol
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I agree with Nathan.
Permalink Submitted by sarah wilson on
I agree with Nathan. Beautiful Chris. You could put a collection of these together. xx
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Well said, Chris. A
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Well said, Chris. A collection would be a brilliant idea, as sarah suggests.
Tina xx
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