Beach Hotel

By johnshade

Mon, 15 Mar 2010

4 comments

Is anything sadder
than ageing Brits
and ageing Germans
lounging in the sun?
Does anything impel you
to end your life so young?

Permalink Submitted by Luly Whisper on Mon, 2010-03-15 20:18

It might be worth trying to condense this into a haiku. - Just a suggestion.

Permalink Submitted by johnshade on Tue, 2010-03-16 22:50

fat Brits, fatter krauts, sun on an empty pool - sheets make a noose.

Permalink Submitted by nametaken on Mon, 2010-03-15 21:56

Brits are fatter than krauts.

Permalink Submitted by johnshade on Tue, 2010-03-16 08:12

obese rosbifs turn pink on white loungers - exhaust in the car.