Down In The Dumps
By luigi_pagano
Mon, 24 May 2010
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We met last year at the municipal dump
among a collection of recycling bins.
I had an old mower and a bicycle pump,
she had newspapers, bottles and tins.
We gradually increased our trips to the tip;
not just routinely, it was almost a ritual.
It was a weak moment when I let it slip
that I fancied her. She said it was mutual.
There followed a period of perfect bliss
when no wrong words crossed our lips,
no disagreements and nought was amiss
and we behaved like a couple of drips.
Yet good things must come to an end.
Ironic though that on this very dump
she made her mind up I wasn’t a friend
and promptly ditched this hapless chump.
© Luigi Pagano 2010
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I like this a lot. The
Permalink Submitted by InspiredWriter on
I like this a lot. The honesty is good (:
InspiredWriter X
Noah
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Ah, I think I've been at the
Ah, I think I've been at the same tip, Luigi. I was the one making out by the old fridges. Neat piece, this.
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Hi there, Luigi! I have
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Hi there, Luigi! I have many fridge magnets...most of which were given to me by my girls for mother's day and suchlike over the years. Many a true word is written on a fridge magnet, and surely, here in this poem, as Inspired Writer already points out.
A brilliant take on the I.P. and one of my many favourites of yours.
Tina xxx
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It sure do, Luigi. More
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
It sure do, Luigi. More power to fridge magnets is what I say;-)
Tina xxx
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I have a box of words and
I have a box of words and letters - a Fridge Magnet Poetry Kit. Its a great way to pass the time while cooking dinner...
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Love the narrative voice in
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Love the narrative voice in this one, Luigi! Well done on the cherry ;)
Magic xxx
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new Luigi_Pagano Hi!
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Luigi_Pagano
Hi! Luigi
Well done on the well earn't cherry!
Just keyed in for a minute.
I love the Title,cos;many feel like that.
the stanza I like is:
There followed a period of perfect bliss
when no wrong words crossed our lips.
no disagreements and nought was amiss
and we behaved like a couple of drips.
Great.and the last stanza.
It's amazing?what one takes to a tip?
and dumps,or brings back.?maybe.
Yep! I too have quite a few magents now.
But new fridge slip off."Elvis Presley"
Mermaids,Birds,Frogs.Heart lights up.many more
and a camel,daughter brings some from abroad and Camel one.Monkey,spolit for hoice now.
julie x
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