So I am struck by our love..

By Beeme

Thu, 09 Jul 2009
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18 comments
 

So I am struck by our love.
Looking at your innocent face
as you sleep, slowly inhaling
a sense of security for me.
If rose buds can answer my
prayers, then let this love forever
blossom in our hearts. My eyes
are hanging onto the light of the lamp
and open wide to the light of dawn.
And I can not let them shut to dream
because I am scared that if I sleep our
paradise could become a nightmare?

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Comments

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
'My eyes are hanging onto the light of the lamp and open wide to the light of dawn.' - such a lovely image! Well done ;) Magic xxx

 

Submitted by Beeme on
Thanks Magic, I'm glad you enjoyed this :) btw good luck in your exams x Beeme xxx

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Submitted by Beeme on
Thanks SundaysChild I'm pleased you liked this :) Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new SundaysChild well put to-gether and explained and natural daily life. "Dusty Springfield" "I close my eyes and count to 10" but when I open them your still here" love verses real to life. julie cavalcaderl. good work -;)

Submitted by Beeme on
Thanks for your kind words Julie x Glad you enjoyed ;)

k.

Submitted by Nolan on
If I were tickled by the rub of love. And what's the rub? Death's feather on the nerve? D.T.
 

Submitted by Beeme on
lol perhaps, its a good interpretation. Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by Nolan on
Moonstruck. The way to live in a dream is to just flow with it &&
 

Submitted by Nolan on
Row row row your boat Gently down the stream Merrily merrily merrily Life is but a dream!
 

Submitted by Beeme on
life is but a dream :)

k.

Submitted by Nolan on
&& You can be in my dream if I can be in yours- Bob Dylan
 

Submitted by Beeme on
Take care of all your memories. For you cannot relive them- Bob Dylan

k.

Submitted by Nolan on
It is so Beeme. But the best memories are yet to come!
 

Submitted by Beeme on
I hope so :) Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by Nolan on
Brilliant
 

Submitted by Beeme on
:)

k.

Submitted by Kahdai on
Aaw that is so beautiful beeme! I wld fave it! I will say it should get a cherry! xxxK

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by Beeme on
wow thank you very much Kahdai! I'm glad you enjoyed :) Beeme xx

k.