Solveig's Song
By Silver Spun Sand
Mon, 09 Aug 2010
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I glimpse her at the sink
washing plates and dishes;
through an open window
wafts a melody by Grieg.
So pure, so clear;
tears stand in my eyes
amazed by the clarity
the pitch, the tone
as her voice floats
to the ring of crystal
rinsed in winter water.
I loose her apron strings...
pull her close –
breathe through her hair –
detect a hint of patchouli;
taste her lips – a trace
of brandy; the kind lingers
long like honey on your tongue.
Then he comes home –
closes the blinds – puts on
the TV.
I retreat to my small corner,
humming to myself;
slightly off-key.
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This is lovely Tina - I like
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This is lovely Tina - I like the contrast towards the end
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A wonderful snapshot, dear
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
A wonderful snapshot, dear Tina! There is much to read between the lines as they say. I especially loved the final stanza and that last line rounded it off perfectly ;)
Magic xxx
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aaw Tina, don be shut in the
aaw Tina, don be shut in the dark, just like one of my dark poems! Anyway I really like the rest of it, the chemistry ;) love in noticing her details, patchouli hair and brandy syrup tongue, its adorable xx K
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lovely images, and a little
lovely images, and a little bit of mystery, great stuff.
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This is extremely moving and
This is extremely moving and beautiful Tina. I really enjoyed :)
Beeme xx
k.
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